<p>Hey guys, I need some suggestions for my essay. I've already gotten a teacher to check it, but he didn't provide me with enough advice to completely satisfy me. I don't know if I'm stressing the right factors and providing enough detail? Any help would be greatly appreciated!</p>
<p>PM me the prompt or essay and I'll be sure to give you my thoughts/suggestions.</p>
<p>pm me i'll read it</p>
<p>I could read it. Maybe I'll send you mine too. Do critique.</p>
<p>I'll try to read it.pm me</p>
<p>I'll read it and I'm being critical lately, mostly because I've been researching on making mine better too xD</p>
<p>I ll read it</p>
<p>Class of 09, got 20...well 16 minutes.. PM at your own risk O_o</p>
<p>yeah.. i'll read</p>
<p>Sure, just PM me.</p>
<p>PM me (class of 08, at harvard)</p>
<p>PM me...I will read it.</p>
<p>i'll read it, pm me.</p>
<p>biology0801 is a liar. why would a college freshman wanna look over an application essay. they should be exhausted from it!</p>
<p>EXCUSE ME, Redwood. I just created a new account because I had too many posts in my other one so it was too revealing of my high school years. No one has to send me anything. I am very busy, but I am willing to help on CC.</p>
<p>Sure ill look at it </p>
<p>im in AP Lit and Language and Composition for a reason. As well as an english tutor. </p>
<p>Im kind of harsh though :)</p>
<p>I wanna take a look at it....PM it to me.....</p>
<p>sure if you feel like</p>
<p>send it my way.</p>
<p>i can try :)</p>