<p>I was wondering if any of the esteemed students of harvard would be willing to give me some feedback on my essay, I promise it is not a total bore. An honest opinion would be great. Thanks to any volunteers, if you are willing, I will PM you.</p>
<p>I’ll read it! Just send it in via pm. I’m a harsh critic as I’m a writer/reader junkie. So I have no problem being harsh if I find something that isn’t up to par. Though keep in mind that it is your creativity and your work, so don’t let opinions really shape how you write it or keep it. If you are satisfied then its fine.</p>
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<p>I’ll take a shot at it as well if you’re looking for more readers.</p>
<p>Labor day so I could if you want an extra guy :)</p>
<p>Sure, PM it over. I’m not Harvard though, so be warned 
I go to Princeton.</p>
<p>I hate to hijack this thread but HYPSMIT could you maybe read mine? its only about 650 words and i just need people to read it for quality. the editing process is pretty much done</p>
<p>if there was some really bad person he could just steal your essay and send it to his own college…</p>
<p>@ alisa530, I know that, thats why before I send mine I usually go look up posts and threads created by the people who volunteer, just to make sure that they are already accepted into a college, that way the risk of getting my essay stolen is minimized, I don’t send my essays to people applying for the class of 2015.</p>
<p>would any of you mind reading my additional essay please? I’m still working on the main one… It would be great to get feedback from students who actually got in! <em>sigh</em></p>
<p>I’ll PM it across.</p>