Any readers want to help before I submit?

<p>I'm doing ED to Cornell, this is my common app essay.</p>

<p>Anyone want to give it a good look over before I submit?</p>

<p>Thank you!!</p>

<p>I’ll read yours if you read mine</p>

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<p>sure, PM it. I just sent mine.</p>

<p>and what university are you using it for?</p>

<p>i’m applying to duke</p>

<p>btw your essay is really good</p>

<p>thanks, i’m really big on imagery…that’s one of the reasons why i liked your essay because it had so much of it, i could really get a good picture of what you were seeing in your essay</p>

<p>anyone else want to read my essay and offer advice?</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>I’ll read it. Not applying to any Ivies. PM me.</p>

<p>I will if you want.</p>

<p>Applying to BC only at this time, not interested in Cornell</p>

<p>I sent you my essay.</p>

<p>Anyone else able to give my essay a read-through?</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

<p>I am applying to common app schools, but no EDs. I’d love to read your essay if you don’t mind, but if you don’t its no problem. Good luck! :)</p>

<p>I’ll trade essays if you want. Mine is a common app essay as well</p>

<p>ill read! pm me and good luck!</p>

<p>Sure, I’m not applying to Cornell but I’ll give suggestions.</p>

<p>artemis.of.anatolia(at)gmail(dot)com or PM!</p>

<p>PM me! good luck</p>

<p>I’ll swap, if you want.</p>

<p>And, if you want, I’ll destroy it xP</p>

<p>Pm it over!</p>

<p>i sent over my essay, and sure send me yours i’d be happy to read it.</p>