Any suggestions on my essay?

College Essays
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<p>Please let me know what you think about my essay! Message me please!</p>

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<p>Hi You can PM me.Me a parent </p>

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<p>I’ll take a look.</p>

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<p>I can if u want</p>

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<p>anyone else???</p>

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<p>me</p>

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<p>here!</p>

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<p>anyone ACTUALLY willing to read my essay AND give feedback?</p>

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<p>You have to pm it to those who’ve said they are willing…</p>