anybody interested to look at my Cornell transfer essay??

Transfer Students
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<p>hey guys! I am stressing out here......4 more days to go till deadline for Cornell, but I am stuck on this essay for CAS that I have been writing for a month now.....it requires me to
"discuss a quotation or personal motto that reflects your values and beliefs and tells us something about the kind of person you are" </p>

<p>Would anyone experienced like to read my essays, and show me what I could improve? I think I tried to put too much in there, and lost my focus..... Thank you so much in advance!</p>

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<p>Fire away.</p>

<p><a href="mailto:jwrappap@usc.edu">jwrappap@usc.edu</a></p>

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<p>The deadline for Cornell is four days?</p>

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<p>Yep, the 31st.</p>

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<p>hey you can PM it to me if you like</p>

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<p>im in CAS at cornell...you can PM me with it if you want</p>

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<p>spiralstar: Feel free to PM me if you need an additional critique.</p>

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<p>thz sooo much guys!</p>