Anybody want to critique my Common App essay?

<p>Anybody want to critique my Common App essay? Submitting it for Stanford SCEA.</p>

<p>It's about how I wrote a published book and went to #1 on Amazon.</p>

<p>Reply and I'll PM. Thanks!</p>

<p>i’ll read yours if you read mine</p>

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