Anybody want to review my 'Why Penn' essay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of Pennsylvania
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<p>I’m applying to Wharton, so does anybody want to critique my ‘why penn’ essay? (preferably somebody who is finished with apps or got in ed)</p>

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<p>bump??????</p>

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<p>PM me, im willing to read.</p>

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<p>hi, glad to read your essay, pm me</p>

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<p>PM me and ill read it.</p>

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<p>i want to, pm me</p>

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<p>i will, pm me.</p>

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<p>i'll read, im me on aim - gedalas06</p>

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<p>Sure PM me</p>

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<p>i love to read these- Pm me</p>

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<p>PM Me, ill read it</p>