Anybody willing to read my E.C. commonapp essay? Please? :)

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>I need feedback on my Short Answer/Extracurricular Essay for the commonapp. Any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated! I'll PM you with it.</p>

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<p>sure I will!</p>

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<p>I will! :]</p>

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<p>Sure, just PM me.</p>