anybody willing to read my essay? option 3

<p>I'm at almost 800 words, but I'm still not sure if my message is clear enough. Is anybody willing to give me some last-minute feedback?</p>

<p>ok.... i was accepted ea so i won't steal it</p>

<p><em>bump</em></p>

<p>anybody else?</p>

<p>here (10char)</p>