Anyone bored?

Transfer Students
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<p>Hi, I'm Phill. If anyone here is bored or willing to lend a helping hand, do you think you'd be able to review an admissions essay I'm writing?</p>

<p>I'm transferring from a CC and hoping to get into one of my state schools (one of which is my dream school). I'd love to be a dentist one day, just to let you know a little more about myself.</p>

<p>Just let me know if you might have the time (and patience) to review it over the next few weeks. As an extra incentive, I'll throw in a funny cat video as a reward. =)</p>

<p>I'll send you a message later on with the document attached if you can help.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance. I really appreciate the help!</p>

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<p>I’ll be glad to.</p>

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<p>I’ll be glad to, too. :)</p>

<p>Although since I’m on the other side of the globe, it might take me a day to respond.</p>

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<p>Hi,</p>

<p>I am in the middle of what seems the never ending application process as well!!! I would love to read your essay and give you a helping hand (it’ll take my mind off my own writing) but I promise I won’t steal any of your ideas!</p>

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<p>Okay…I’ll be PMing you guys in the next few days. </p>

<p>Thank you SO much for volunteering to help me! It really does make a difference to me.</p>