Anyone Care to Critique an Ever Evolving Essay?

<p>250 words in response to this prompt:
Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by (among other things) shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine, interest, race, ideology, or intellectual heritage. Choose one of the communities to which you belong, and describe that community and your place within it.</p>

<p>Be harsh if necessary and I will critique anyone else's also, but you'll have to wait until tomorrow because I can barely keep my eyes open right now :P</p>

<p>Pretty please :)</p>

<p>Sure PM me it.</p>

<p>I’ll be happy to give feedback.</p>

<p>Hey I can help, PM it over</p>