Anyone care to give me feedback on my Common App essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hey, guys! So, I was finally able to come up with an idea for my personal essay after weeks and weeks of head-scratching and nail-biting, and I would really appreciate some honest feedback! It's just the rough draft, so it still needs a bit of work, but I would like to know whether or not you guys think it is sufficiently thought out and a good topic.</p>

<p>It is in response to the "Describe a place or environment in which you are perfectly content" prompt.</p>

<p>Please let me know if you would be interested in reading and critiquing it for me, and I will PM it to you at once.</p>

<p>Thanks! :)</p>

<p>P.S. I am open to providing feedback to anyone else's essay as well, so just let me know.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it and pass a few comments</p>

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<p>I’ll read if you want</p>

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<p>I can help: email me : <a href="mailto:huangittf@126.com">huangittf@126.com</a></p>

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<p>I’ll read and comment. :slight_smile: Could u help me with mine too?</p>

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<p>ill read it. PM me</p>

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<p>Thanks, guys! Sorry for the late reply. Internet issues. Meh. I’ll message the essay to y’all right now.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>Okay, so everyone should have been PM’d the essay by now.
Thanks again, guys!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it too</p>

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<p>I’ll read if you still need opinions.</p>