<p>i've already shown my essay to some teachers and a few friends and gotten pretty positive reviews, and they've already been sent to all my colleges, but i was curious about what others would think...if you're interested in reading my common app essay or my harvard supplement about living in a different country, just pm me and i'll send it over :)</p>
<p>i’ll critique it. im a junior so i guess it would help me for next year too lol. win-win situation lol? i guess all i can do is spot grammatical errors or find awkward wordings?..i did get a perfect writing score, so… =P</p>
<p>I can take a look too if you want. Just pm it over :)</p>