Anyone care to read my essay?

<p>The long one for the supplement. I think its ok, but I feel its a bit random at times and it also doesn't go very deep into math and science theory, just me simply exploring stuff through curiosity. Please critique it if you can! Thanks so much.</p>

<p>sure </p>

<p>I'd be glad to provide any help.</p>

<p>I can if you want me to. Promise not to steal it and if it helps: I'm taking 3 english classes next term, one of which is AP, and I scored 800 on critical reading.</p>

<p>If you're willing to send it to me, I'm willing to review it. :)</p>

<p>Bit late for this isn't it?</p>

<p>If on the off chanve you havent submitted yet and you read this, I will still review it. </p>

<p>This seems highly unlikely though.</p>

<p>i'll read it! =D</p>