<p>Hey everyone, I just finished the first draft of my personal statements for the UC's and have revised them a bit. I obviously have a long way to go with them, yet would really appreciate a little critique before I revise again. Also, i'd love to hear some grammar corrections, such as a part where where/when confuses me, and have/has. If you are interested, I will send you a message with it. Thanks so much!</p>
<p>-Joey</p>