<p>Hey guys.</p>
<p>Okay so I've been working on my common app & I'm having a really hard time. My original goal was to talk about my journey of moving to America, learning English, staying in touch w/ my culture through involvement w/ Persian Cultural Association, and spreading cultural awareness by starting a summer camp for little kids. </p>
<p>I've written everything I want to include, but it doesn't flow well. My major problem is inserting the cultural stuff in the essay. Right now, my essay concentrates on the language barrier, but I actually want it to concentrate on the cultural aspect. Anyone willing to read my essay & help?? </p>
<p>Thank you! :)</p>