Anyone good with intros?

<p>I'm trying to see if this introduction to my essay is going anywhere (i'm one of those people who has to have the beginning perfected before I can move on.) Anyone care to take a look?</p>

<p>ahhh, you're just like me... This quirk is a CURSE. Anyways, I'll take a look. Just PM me :)</p>

<p>Haha, same. It's tough. It took me all night on Tuesday. But once I got it down, the rest pretty much fell into place.</p>

<p>ill give it a look as well.</p>

<p>I'll take a look! I'm having this problem too indeed :S</p>