<p>Just need some feedback
Thank you!</p>
<p>Sure I'll read it.</p>
<p>thank you i'll IM you!</p>
<p>I'm noticing some issues with grammar and punctuation... Although I'm not the best at this sort of thing I'll give you a proofread on Word. Would you accept Word files from me?</p>
<p>yea definitely</p>
<p>I will read it too.
I will try to help you in improving the content.</p>
<p>I'll give it a read too.</p>
<p>pm it to me</p>
<p>i wanna see it</p>
<p>u wanna see it only? lol</p>
<p>What is your major? I would be interested in reading it. I am appealing as well, perhaps you can take a look at mine once I have finished it.</p>
<p>i'll help you with your appeal
PM me</p>
<p>i am appealing also mayb eyou can read mine</p>
<p>ditto UCBorUCLA. trade for trade lol. :P</p>
<p>sendsendsendsend</p>
<p>I don't mind reading it, I'll give you honest feedback</p>
<p>i'll be happy to help you edit it; PM me!</p>
<p>i would like to read your appeal. send !</p>
<p>the thing is ppl always say that they will read and give me feedback</p>
<p>but...they never respond after that</p>
<p>:(</p>
<p>UCBorUCLA,</p>
<p>This is one of the things you need to watch out for on College Confidential. Your work may be plagiarized. Two years ago, I heard of applicants stealing others' UC essays for freshman admission through CC PM's. Be careful about who you send your work to.</p>