Anyone Interested to Look at My Common App Essays ?

<p>Hello everyone I'm trying to apply to a few private schools for business programs. I am a transfer student and currently have a 4.0 GPA in community college and I am applying to all these schools by Feb of 2013 for fall 2013 admission because most of them don't have spring admission. I would really appreciate any help and don't worry my feelings won't get hurt by remarks about my writing. The reason for me desperately needing help is although I have a 4.0 GPA from a CC I was a high school drop out. I left school when I was 16 and I really would love to transfer and graduate by 2015 or 2016. If you guys are willing to help me out PM me for the essays THANKS =D.</p>