<p>So, this is pretty much the same post as "desperate asian"...I used this as my ED essay for Columbia, but I'm also using it for "topic of choice" on the common app for the rest of my schools..</p>
<p>I am worried about people stealing it, soooo please don't :) haha</p>
<p>Just let me know if you'd like to read it with any suggestions, feel free to be brutal!
And, I'd prefer emailing it.. I'm new here and don't really check this that often
Also, I'd be more than willing to read anyone else's essay in return!</p>