<p>I finished my 2 UPenn essays last week and really love them both :) but I am looking for critique and maybe word choice editing and will not be offended whatsoever! Please let me know if you want to read them. I want you to tear them apart. Also, please nobody applying 2014.</p>
<p>I can do this if you please, but in exchange for me reading 2 of your essays, you will read my Brown supplement and tell me if you like it?
Let me know bro.</p>
<p>I’ll read it if you need someone. 
Already accepted Wharton ED.</p>
<p>I’ll read yours if you read mine. </p>
<p>I am 2014, but I am not applying to UPenn.</p>
<p>bump… sorry :-/ i don’t mean to be obnoxious</p>
<p>I’d love to read it! PM me.</p>