<p>Hello out there :)</p>
<p>I just finished writing my CommonApp-Essay but right now I am not 100% sure if it is good enough. Well it's kinda difficult to say since I wrote it, so I would just love to get some comments on it.</p>
<p>Furthermore, I am an International and therefore it would be really nice if someone of you native speakers could check my essay for grammatical errors. I checked it several times myself but sometimes one makes errors that are only obvious to a native speaker.</p>
<p>Thanks in advance!!</p>
<p>schreibfeder</p>
<p>P.S. Only established CC-users pls =)</p>