<p>It's a very very rough draft. Writing isn't my thing, so this is a good effort for me haha. And it's too long, so I have to shorten it. I also may use this as a supplement essay for multiple schools. I don't really know yet...I'm just rolling with it. Any critiques are greatly appreciated! Let me know and I'll PM it :]</p>
<p>Pretty please?</p>
<p>You can PM it to me.</p>
<p>I’ll read it!</p>
<p>You can send it to me!</p>
<p>sure-i’ll read it!</p>
<p>Sure I’ll read it…</p>
<p>I’ll take a look.</p>