Anyone to Read One of My Georgetown Essays?

College Essays
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<p>It's the one specific to the College. Any suggestions on how to cut it down a bit would be appreciated (it's a tad long--I'd like to get rid of about 125 words), as would any comments as to how well it addresses the prompt.</p>

<p>So I don't have to write it out at the beginning of each message, the prompt is: "Please relate your interest in studying at Georgetown University to your goals. How do these thoughts relate to your chosen course of study?"</p>

<p>For me, this translates to: "Why Government at Georgetown?"</p>

<p>If you could PM me with your email address, I'd appreciate it. It's far easier to send these things as attachments rather than copy and paste them and meticulously separate each paragraph and fix indents. I don't know about you, but I hate doing that.</p>

<p>After this, only three more essays to go! Whee!</p>

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<p>Yeah, I'll take a look.</p>

<p>Email me through the link in my Public Profile page.</p>

<p>Nevermind I'll PM you.</p>

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<p>^^Email sent. Thanks.</p>

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<p>You can send it to me too, if you need another read....</p>

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<p>hpg90, would you be willing to PM me your email, or do you want me to just PM the essay to you?</p>

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<p>I'm applying to Gtown NHS..would you like to trade?</p>

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<p>ill glad to read it toss it over ;)</p>