Anyone to review my common app essay?

College Essays
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<p>I need some help in my essay, I'm pretty unsure about it.
Just post here, and I ll pm you.
Thanks a lot in advance.</p>

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<p>I can read yours if you read mines.</p>

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<p>bump 10char</p>

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<p>I’ll give it a look</p>

<p>Sent from my DROID RAZR using CC</p>

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<p>bumping again, need editing tips and all</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look if you’d like, just PM me</p>

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<p>I’ll give feedbacks if you want a help. just pm me soon.</p>

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<p>I can take a look at it, if you’d like. PM me</p>

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<p>sure i will.</p>

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<p>can someone review my common app essay??? I’ll review theirs. I’m feeling a little anxious about it and want a second opinion.</p>