<p>I'm in the middle of drafting my Common App transfer essay, and was wondering if anyone wanted to give it a read. It's a very straightforward essay explaining why I'm transferring, and addresses my terrible GPA at my first institution with personal background in a traumatic event. I wanted to make sure I'm not making the essay too heavy with dark material, so I'd really appreciate it if someone could critique it! Thanks in advance!</p>
<p>I’d be happy to critique it. :)</p>
<p>Send it over. I can read.</p>