Anyone wanna chance me? (RD for CAS)

<p>GPA: UW 3.5</p>

<p>Intended Major: Economics
Class Rank: School doesn't rank
School: Private; super selective
Location: NYC
Race: Caucasian
Income: Low-Mid (Enough to get by)</p>

<p>Scores:</p>

<p>SAT Reasoning:
Math -- 620
Critical Reading -- 610
Writing -- 750</p>

<p>ACT:
English -- 33
Math -- 28
Reading -- 28
Science -- 29
Composite -- 30</p>

<p>Subject Tests:
US History-- 670
Literature-- 630</p>

<p>APs (my school doesn't have any AP courses; much more rigorous than AP):
US History-- 4
Literature-- 4
Euro History-- 3</p>

<p>ECs:
Part of program in which I mentor of underprivileged student in NYC <a href="10-12">I was once part of this program in the 5th grade-8th grade</a>; Yearbook (11-12); Various Cultural Societies (10-12); Economics Club (11-12); Christian Service Program (12); Medical Science Club (9-10); Hockey Club (9-12); Intern at top PR firm in NYC (Summer of 2010); Featured Columnist on BleacherReport.com</p>

<p>Essays + Recs: Should be top of the line</p>

<p>Hooks: First generation American; First generation college; Only second in immediate family to attend university; Sister graduated NYU in 08' (minor legacy?)</p>

<p>anyone? bump</p>

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<p>Hi, Cudder, </p>

<p>Just some feedback since you seem to really want some input.</p>

<p>1) If you have not sent in your scores, I recommend that you just send in your ACT scores since they seem to be the best overall. That is, if you took ACT with writing (required). If not, then you will have to send in your SAT Is, which do not look as good as your ACT scores, except for SAT I Writing. SAT I Writing may not be as important as Math and Critical Reading. On second thought, send in both the ACT and SAT I scores since they will likely look at your best scores for both, if you want them to see your strength in Writing.</p>

<p>See the following link on how you stack up against accepted NYU students on your ACT score (your strength in standardized testing overall):</p>

<p>[College</a> Search - New York University - NYU - SAT®, AP®, CLEP®](<a href=“College Search - BigFuture | College Board”>College Search - BigFuture | College Board)</p>

<p>2) I am not clear. Did you self-study and obtained the AP scores you reported above since you mentioned your school does not offer AP classes? Also, you stated your school’s classes are more rigorous than AP courses offered in other schools? That is if I understand you correctly? If that is the case, you should make sure your guidance counselor documents the rigorous nature of the classes in your school and specifically the rigor of the classes you took personally.</p>

<p>3) I am not sure if the average GPA of 3.6 for CAS is for the weighted or unweighted GPA. I am assuming it is the unweighted, so you are close to the average in this regard.
Please note: your unweighted GPA of 3.5 should be stronger than it appears if, in fact, your school offers very rigorous courses. Thus, once again, your counselor’s statement and comments about this will be very important.</p>

<p>4) You seem to have a good variety of ECs. The internship and Featured Columnist seem like the strongest experiences in terms of standing out in some way. Otherwise, you seem to lack leadership positions in your ECs. Since that is the case, you need to capture how your ECs reflect on your positive strengths, values, and characteristics as a person in your essay. I hope this has been done already in what you have written up.</p>

<p>5) Separately, regarding the description of your and your family income status: low middle class?, “enough to get by.” Yet you are in private school. Did you get some financial aid to attend or is the cost of tuition reasonable for your private H.S. (Frankly, I cannot imagine a “reasonably priced” private school at whatever level.) This point is related to NYU. Make sure your family can support you with payment of your NYU education because it is probable you will not get the full aid you require (based on the low middle class status you specified). Perhaps you will luck out and receive more aid based on need than the
typical NYU student who is accepted. But I would not bank on it. So be prepared to discuss with your family your ability to handle the financial costs of attending a super expensive school like NYU CAS.</p>

<p>OK, that wraps up my feedback for you. I hope you find it helpful in some way.</p>

<p>1) Thanks! I’ll look into this</p>

<p>2) Correct. I bought AP books and self-studied. Also all of our materials sent to colleges address the rigorous nature of my school I made sure of that lol</p>

<p>3) It’s unweighted. My school doesn’t use a weighted GPA</p>

<p>4) Thanks for the comments. My personal statement revolved around life changing surgeries I had and how one of my ECs (the mentorship program that I’ve been in since the 5th grade–I was mentored then; I became a mentor in 10th grade) taught me a few values after the experience. I’ll be using that 150 word EC portion of the CA to my full advantage as well.</p>

<p>5) I forgot to mention that my school gives a full ride to all that get admitted. The scholarship is worth around $25K a year. So nothing came out of my pocket :slight_smile: My guidance counselor puts a description of this process somewhere in my file as well.</p>

<p>Thanks again for the feedback! Also, does NYU usually call students in for an interview?</p>

<p>Cudder,</p>

<p>No interviews for NYU applicants. They have too many people applying for all the schools. Something like 38,000 students?</p>

<p>3) I knew your GPA provided was unweighted, as you stated. My point was I was not sure whether the average 3.6 GPA of admitted NYU students is the weighted or unweighted one.
I think it is unweighted 3.6.</p>

<p>4) Actually, I did think there was the most depth in your mentorship position of all the ECs since it reflected many years of involvement, first as the person who was mentored, and then becoming a mentor yourself. So it makes sense for you to focus on it in your essay.</p>

<p>1 & 2) Your AP scores are rather average, especially with the 3 in Euro History, so I am not sure if it will support your contention that your school offers tougher courses than AP classes (in which case you should be able to achieve 4s and even 5s on the AP exams). Maybe you can work around it by not reporting the AP scores, or you can just report the 2 with the scores of 4, if that is allowed for you to pick and choose APs scores to send (I cannot remember the policy off-hand right now).</p>

<p>bumpppppppp</p>