Anyone wanna critique a national merit essay for me?

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<p>Say yes and I'll PM it to you. Thank you for any help.</p>

2

<p>Yes. 10char.</p>

3

<p>PM’d. Thanks bro</p>

4

<p>Okay, sure.</p>

5

<p>Why not. Sure. 10 char</p>

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<p>I’m up for it.</p>

7

<p>Yes. sure haha.</p>

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<p>PM’d everyone else in this thread. Thanks guys.</p>

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<p>I just used my common app essay is that bad lol</p>

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<p>Nope, I’m using a slightly modified version of my UF essay, I just wanna make sure it lives up to the perceived standards of a National Merit essay.</p>

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<p>Yes! Absolutely!</p>