Anyone wanna critique my essay?

<p>It's for Rutgers :)</p>

<p>I don't really know how this whole thing works, since I can't post it full out right here, but I could really use some critique.</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

<p>Also my common app one :)</p>

<p>what common app prompt did you do?</p>

<p>The environment I feel most comfortable in</p>

<p>I’ll take a look at them! PM me</p>

<p>I’d be glad to read both for you!</p>

<p>If you still need someone to read your essay, let me know.</p>

<p>i would like to read it for you.</p>

<p>I would like to read it. Pm me</p>

<p>I’ll read it.</p>