<p>If you want more constructive criticism, pm me. I have read and critiqued several.</p>
<p>I’d be happy to critique as well. Reminder me of reading all of those TASP essays in January. It’ll be like that all over again this fall…</p>
<p>To everyone who didn’t get my essay, I decided not to send it because I got some very good advice from one of the first posters. It would be pointless to send it over and over again and waste all of your time when you will all probably tell me the same thing. Thanks for offering to help!!!</p>
<p>I’ll critique!</p>