<p>Needs edit, is rather pathetic currently. Anyone want to do an essay swap to edit?</p>
<p>pleeeeeeease? your essay doesn’t have to be a georgetown essay (actually, it’d be preferable if it weren’t!)</p>
<p>i will. : ) pm me yours and i’ll send you mine</p>
<p>PM me, I’d love to read it.</p>
<p>@dreamingawake25: This thread is 3 years old, so I imagine that otaru (who was admitted to Williams College) doesn’t need any more feedback for his essay.</p>