Anyone wanna look at my essay?

Hey I need someone to look at my essay and tell me if it’s a good enough essay to send to a place like CalTech. I’d also appreciate some proofreading for errors if possible. I basically just want to know if I need to scrap it and start over, or if it’s good enough to go ahead and send. I’m also applying to Stanford, MIT, and Princeton, but these are all my reach schools. My more realistic choices would be Harvey Mudd, Alabama, Carnegie Mellon, USC, and UC Berkeley. Anyway Reply and I’ll pm it to you ASAP

I’ll look over it. But you should know that I’m a senior in hs, not an English professor XD

I also need anyone to judge my essay

It My First Post Here and i just wrote an essay . i’m in a dire need for someone to review my essay

ok johnbarron and mohamed – PM me your essays. I can’t judge an essay or tell you if it’s good enough for a specific school, but I will give you honest feedback on if it’s well written or if it needs some work.

I’d be willing to help if you’d like. Read my older posts and you’ll see that both of my boys are at Stanford. Older son also got into CalTech. Younger got into Princeton, Yale, MIt, etc. but chose Stanford. Good luck.

I am an MIT alum and happy to look over your essay.

I’ll be happy to provide constructive feedback. =) Just PM me!

Could someone please also take the time to review my essay? I really need help and honest criticism!

shoot me a pm