Anyone wanna read my Common App essay?

College Essays
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<p>It's the prompt about failure and stuff. Anyone? :D</p>

<p>I need to rework the introduction a bit to make it stronger and more of a "hook" so yeah, I'll send it to whoever is willing after I do that. Thanks!</p>

<p>And FYI (if it matters) I'm applying to UPenn ED and UChicago EA (probably on the latter, not sure yet, depends on supplements. Definitely doing ED for UPenn though).</p>

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<p>PM me ~ I’ll read it !</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>Alright after I get it back from my English teacher and revise it I will send it to you guys, thanks a ton!</p>

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<p>I’d love to read and provide my comments. </p>

<p>Though I am not an expert so its your wish if you want to send it or not!</p>

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<p>I would love to read it!</p>

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<p>If you still need someone to help out, I’d read it! I’m applying to Dartmouth ED and Notre Dame EA</p>

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<p>Alright, I finally finished revising my essay. Here it is: <a href=“https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OKl_0YIzV9No6jEzjUd6RrrWGSTiNNH4X-9zG_mtGkM/edit?usp=sharing[/url]”>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OKl_0YIzV9No6jEzjUd6RrrWGSTiNNH4X-9zG_mtGkM/edit?usp=sharing&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

<p>I’ll also PM each of you that responded with a link in case.</p>

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<p>I made the document private (for obvious reasons that I didn’t realize at the time) so you’ll have to PM me your emails if you want to be able to read the essay.</p>

<p>Sorry for the inconvenience everybody!</p>