Anyone wanna read my essay? Fairly long and personal

College Essays
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<p>I really need any advice I can get. Anyone wanna read it? Will pm it to you.</p>

<p>And no I'm not PMing it to somebody who joined like 1-2 months ago</p>

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<p>Anybody at all?</p>

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<p>bumpasfjsdlkfjsdkljfklasd</p>

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<p>Lol, I only joined last month, but I’m a HS junior, so no essay stealing or anything. I can give you some feedback though, I’m pretty good with writing and all that dandy stuff…so, if my join date doesn’t turn you off too much, pm it over.</p>

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<p>I joined in July so I’m totally trustworthy, PM me!!</p>

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<p>pm and i will analyze it for you</p>

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<p>please PM me!!</p>

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<p>email me at <a href="mailto:masterus2005@sbcglobal.net">masterus2005@sbcglobal.net</a></p>

<p>I will return with feedback.</p>