<p>I'd appreciate some constructive criticism on my college app essay, so it'd be great if some of you can help me out. If you want to read it i'll pm you, and you can pm me back with some of your criticisms. Thanks for all your help guys.</p>
<p>Sure.(10char)</p>
<p>sure i'll read it over.</p>
<p>I'll read it.</p>
<p>sure i would love to read it!</p>
<p>i'll do it</p>
<p>thx for all who responded. I only need about three people to read it, so I just sent it out to three random people who responded. Thanks for the offers and help... you guys are great:)</p>