<p>Hey guys!</p>
<p>Well, I just got the first draft of my common app essay done. I'd really appreciate it if someone would help edit it and make it acceptable for submission to dartmouth!</p>
<p>Thanks,
Robbie</p>
<p>hey sure send it over</p>
<p>send it please</p>
<p>hey! I’d love to comment on your essay</p>
<p>I’d recommend that you DON’T send your essay to a bunch of random people on the internet.</p>
<p>Find some people–preferably adults who actually have some expertise in writing–that you know IRL to review it.</p>
<p>If you must turn to CC for reviewers, try the Parents’ Forum.</p>
<p>I agree with Consolation. Something like an AP lang/lit teacher would be much better than random aspiring seniors…</p>
<p>eh…ill critique it…send it over</p>
<p>And if it is a great essay and someone decides to steal it and it shows up at a college that you are applying to also…don’t think you’ll be getting in. They won’t know which one of you is the plagiarist.</p>
<p>It definitely isn’t to your advantage to send it to other potential applicants for the class of 2014. If you must send it to people here, check their previous posts, their graduation or student status, and their establishment within the CC community.</p>