<p>The formal essay. Preferably people who are in boarding school, or people who are completely done with apps. </p>
<p>I'm looking for critique and advice...the harsher the better. Feel free to pick up on the little details, too - I won't get irritated. But please, if my essay is so bad that it blinds you, don't yell at me. I have a feeling it's bad, because all my dad said was "pretty good" and walked away quickly. :/</p>
<p>ill do it… my essay was critqued by my eng teacher and she found no mistakes and coneections. ill read urs if u read my andover essay?</p>
<p>ill read anyone’sss</p>
<p>I will read it. All of my apps are handed in.</p>
<p>I’ll read it if you want :)</p>
<p>I go to exeter
ill read it</p>
<p>I will read it. I have a lot of family members at Boarding School and family that is alumnae. I could ask them to take a look at it also.</p>
<p>ill read it. Im applying to Deerfield.</p>
<p>i’ll read it :3 i have a reputation for being the essay critiquer at my school, haha</p>
<p>where is the essay anyway?</p>
<p>I’ll read it. My applications are complete.</p>
<p>ill read. im finally done with all my apps!</p>
<p>can ii read? im done with apps too.</p>
<p>I can read it. I have some buddies in prep school and college. they may help</p>
<p>Be careful, don’t send it to too many people, Dapple.</p>
<p>or to people with 1-5 posts lol</p>