<p>Hey guys!</p>
<p>I am a little concerned about my Why Penn essay. I am applying to Wharton but also am going for the LSM program. So, I try my best to explain in my essay that I am a business guy who likes some of the medical stuff that Penn officers too. Its a little rough, so ANY feedback is greatly appreciated! Just post below and Ill send it off to you.</p>
<p>THANKS,
Robbie</p>
<p>I can take a look at it for you; I applied to Penn two years ago.</p>
<p>i sent my app in already, i can take a look at it for you :)</p>
<p>Sure, I’ll give you some constructive criticism.</p>
<p>im a student at penn, i’ll take a look.</p>
<p>I’ve done the essay on: which communities of Penn are interesting and how will you contribute…
And that’s the only supplementary essay I can find (other than the truly optional essay)
is there supposed to be Why Penn essay
or short answer on which professor I want to work with???</p>
<p>If there are, can you please help me find it???</p>
<p>I’ll take a look as well, my application is already submitted.</p>
<p>ill read it</p>
<p>cashylee, the why Penn and the professor questions were from last year. Penn decided to consolidate, so the communities question is essentially the why Penn question, albeit worded slightly differently.</p>
<p>^OMG Thank you sooooooooooo much TTTTTT
You saved my life!!</p>
<p>Sure i’d like to read it.</p>
<p>Sure I can read it</p>
<p>Sure PM it over.</p>
<p>I’ll take a look mate, no worries :)</p>