Anyone wanna see if this 150 words short answer is too "asian"?

College Essays
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<p>plz be honest :) I know there are A LOT of grammar mistakes, but now i just wanna know...</p>

<p>1) Is it too long? (max allowed is 150 words and i write 147)
2) Is it too "asian" or not unique enongh?
3) Should I provide more details for that EC? </p>

<p>thx very much!</p>

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<p>i’ll read it.</p>

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<p>PM me. I’ll be happy to take a look at it.</p>

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<p>PM it over!</p>

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<p>PM me and ill give you some feedback! which schools are you going to send this to?</p>

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<p>anyone else?</p>

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<p>PM it to me</p>

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<p>pm it over i’ll read it</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. PM me.</p>

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<p>i’ll gladly read it.</p>

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<p>send it over lol</p>

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<p>I’m Asian, so this ought to be interesting. PM it to me!</p>

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<p>lol pm me, how asian is it?</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll look it over and comment on it. Just PM me.</p>