Anyone wanna take a look at my optional essay?

<p>I'll send u the text in a PM. 409 WC.</p>

<p>Sure 10char</p>

<p>I’ll take a look at it.</p>

<p>I can give feedback. I’m a '15er so no competition here. :)</p>

<p>with pleasure : )</p>

<p>its good but i find ‘nuclear energy’ everywhere , im not good at english but i think you should use some pronouns</p>