Anyone want to critique a possible first draft?

College Essays
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<p>hey guys im new here. ive just finished a tentative first draft that i have mixed feelings about. anyway it would be a huge help if any of u could read it over and give me your comments and ideas on how i could make it better as i think it needs some polishing. PM me if u want to take a look. i would be more than happy to do the same to yours. </p>

<p>oh and please dont distribute it to anyone else :P. i know u wouldnt but i just had to say.</p>

<p>thx</p>

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<p>hey im going to bed (im on london time) so ill send in the morning if anyones interested</p>

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<p>I would love to read it.
be sure to include the prompt.</p>

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<p>Feel free to send it. I'll edit/polish. the prompt would help.</p>

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<p>PM me (with the prompt if possible)</p>