Anyone want to critique my 500 word essay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Dartmouth College
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<p>Just PM me if you do. I'm a little desperate right now to get some "real" advice.</p>

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<p>for the common app main essay?</p>

<p>i would, but im editing my own essay with deadline tomorrow......................</p>

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<p>i'll read both of yours ...</p>

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<p>pm me.. I'm a fine critic</p>

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<p>i'll do it.....</p>

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<p>ill read it!</p>

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<p>I'll read them</p>

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<p>I'll read/comment on it</p>

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<p>I think you would be better off having a live person you trust rather than some random person in cyberspace read and critique your essay.</p>

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<p>I'll be glad to read it.</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>i'll read it..i'm not applying to dartmouth if that helps :)</p>

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<p>if u still need someone pm me</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>I'll read/comment</p>