Anyone want to critique my essay real quick ?

[CX3]

<p>If you do, just reply and I'll send you a PM. Thanks</p>

[zotan]

<p>I'll take a look.</p>

[mtb]

<p>im down...</p>

[jayhawk303]

<p>sure pm me</p>

[ihavenolife]

<p>pm me. i'll pm back to you.</p>

[crims13]

<p>sure -- general impression ?</p>