Anyone want to critique my essay?

<p>As an international, I would like some foreign feedback. If anyone wants to help me with my essay, please post and I will PM you!</p>

<p>PM me...but i'm sick, so it may take a few days...when do you need feedback back by?</p>

<p>if u still need help, pm me...</p>

<p>what is the topic and theme</p>

<p>Go for it.</p>

<p>I can help u... I m from India, btw.</p>

<p>PM me, ill get back in a week or so.
Exams!!! hehe</p>

<p>sure, pm me</p>

<p>i'll read it, PM me....</p>