Anyone want to critique my essay???

Applying to College
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<p>Well, I finally finished my essay for University of Chicago, and it's pretty long!!
Does anyone want to comment on it?? If you do, post so and I will PM you a copy..</p>

<p>Thank you in advance ^_^</p>

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<p>III willlll</p>

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<p>Please send it to me.</p>

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<p>I'll give it a read, pm me</p>

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<p>I'll read it, just pm it to me</p>

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<p>ill critique it no problem</p>

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<p>I'll try my best to edit, just pm me if you're still looking for a reader</p>

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<p>I can help someone out....just pm it over and ill take a look at it</p>