Anyone want to critique my JHU Essay?

<p>Would anyone who has a respectable post count be willing to read my essay and offer comments? I am applying RD for the Class of 2011, so I would prefer readers who are not in the same boat. Thanks in advance.</p>

<p>yeah sure i'll do it</p>

<p>i've decided not to apply to jhu cause i'm goin to PSU! w0ot.</p>

<p>sure i'd love to help</p>

<p>Just a reminder...
...it is STRONGLY DISCOURAGED to share your responses to essays on internet forums. This is a practice that is frowned upon by Admissions professionals. Plagiarism is just one of the many concerns we have about such actions.</p>

<p>just get your friends at school to read it...they understand you more and can actually give more valuable inputs =D</p>

<p>if you want, i would be more then happy to critique ur essay!</p>

<p>I appreciate the offer, but a post count of 1 isn't very reassuring.</p>

<p>Hey weasel I got in JHU ED already. I'll take a look and give my comments!</p>

<p>sure, pm it over.</p>