Anyone want to critique my Why Yale essay?

<p>Please no '14ers and only if you are already in college. Thanks.</p>

<p>Sure would love to. PM me.</p>

<p>I would love to read. PM me. :)</p>

<p>i would read it. ihave a phd in psychology and youngest son won’t be applying for college for two more years</p>

<p>I’ll definitely take a look at it and give you some feed back. PM me. </p>

<p>ps- don’t send it to timothyfromtw-that’s a bad move.</p>

<p>PM it over me Ill revise</p>

<p>why? I’ve already attend to college outside U.S.! Now I’m just consider to transfer to SUNY Buffalo cuz my friends are there.</p>

<p>Is there going to be a “Why Yale” essay this year too? how many words is it?</p>

<p>Send it over mate.</p>

<p>I would appreciate if you can PM it too me…thnx</p>

<p>Sure, PM me, I’ll give feedback.</p>

<p>Same as the rest, willing to read if you want feedback</p>

<p>PM it over! I’ll give you some feedback</p>

<p>yeah im more than willing to go through somethign thats bin written with patience and perseverence.</p>

<p>PM it… I’m a thorough editor</p>