anyone want to help me by reviewing my essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hi,</p>

<p>i am currently writing an essay, and i wonder if anyone could help me review it. Just PM me if you do kindly want to help? thanks :) :)</p>

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<p>BUMP BUMP please help</p>

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<p>I’d like to read!</p>

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<p>BUMP please i need some help</p>