Anyone want to help me out on personal statement

College Essays
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<p>Like title says, I'm still struggling with personal statement. I need to know if my essay has enough substance, do I need to expand on ideas. Give essay a grade on a scale from a to f, including + and -. Does it stand out, is it spectacular or horrendous. Also, it is 626 words, is that bad for common app? I am willing to cut about 75 more words so I am in 500 range. Anyone willing to help would be great. But please, only experienced people who don't steal ideas or essays(Sorry, I am a bit paranoid).</p>

<p>Thanks!!</p>

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<p>oh, and preferably just a quick read, but with prompt feedback, like before I go to sleep</p>

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<p>I'll read it and be quick</p>

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<p>"Also, it is 626 words, is that bad for common app?"
My essay was over 700 words...</p>

<p>"only experienced people who don't steal ideas or essays(Sorry, I am a bit paranoid)"
Being paranoid about that is a good thing! I would more be worried if you were just chucking copies of your essay at any random person!</p>

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<p>i'll take a look. pm me.</p>