<p>i was wondering if anyone would like to read my essay and give me some feedback on it. i deleted a lot of parts from it so now its not all the way finished. but can anyone tell me how it is so far, and what i need to fix?
THANKS!!!!</p>
<p>i desperately need help with my essay....my deadline is soon too so if anyone wants to read it i will pm them.</p>
<p>I need help as well. It appears that others ignore us. Send me your and I will send you mine. :)</p>